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Woman of Substance!

Posted by scorpio1987Sazz on

A woman is all vibrant,

A woman is mysterious.

A woman which knows all,

A woman who loses to win.

A woman unknown to all,

She is the substance, she is the grace. A woman with many face.

© Sajal Gupta – 11.12.2018

PS : The vibrant image used is an acrylic painting using palette knife courtesy to an immensely talented artist Veethica Srivastava.

Published by scorpio1987Sazz

A well traveled, nature loving and an aspiring writer. Have started newly and wish to collaborate with like minded people into the world of literary.

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  1. Deepika Kumaaraguru says:
    Apr 21, 2019 at 19:21

    Wonderful poetry

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    1. scorpio1987Sazz says:
      Apr 24, 2019 at 12:14

      Thanks Deepika

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  2. Sohanpreet Kaur says:
    Apr 21, 2019 at 12:27

    Nice painting and beautiful words. .

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    1. scorpio1987Sazz says:
      Apr 24, 2019 at 12:15

      Thanks a much for your positive feedback!

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  3. jmshistorycorner says:
    Apr 20, 2019 at 13:09

    Nice.

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  4. Neha Kulkarni says:
    Apr 20, 2019 at 12:11

    Perfect..

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    1. scorpio1987Sazz says:
      Apr 24, 2019 at 12:20

      Thanks a lot dear

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  5. Sakshi says:
    Apr 20, 2019 at 10:27

    The painting and your words both are beautiful

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    1. scorpio1987Sazz says:
      Apr 24, 2019 at 12:18

      Thanks a lot Sakshi for your positive response! Glad you likednit

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      1. Sakshi says:
        Apr 25, 2019 at 07:15

        My pleasure

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  6. namitasunder says:
    Jan 8, 2019 at 18:09

    loved the painting and words too…. my favourite line here is…..’A woman who loses to win’….. therein lies the strength.

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Jan 8, 2019 at 18:10

      That’s Ironical :)Thanks for liking it!

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      1. namitasunder says:
        Jan 8, 2019 at 18:13

        thats so true too. All battles are not won by victory/winning ,some are won by losing too.

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        1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
          Jan 8, 2019 at 18:13

          🙂

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        2. scorpio1987Sajal says:
          Jan 8, 2019 at 18:15

          To be frank I was inspired by my mom to write this

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          1. namitasunder says:
            Jan 8, 2019 at 18:20

            And I can fully understand that. … the quiet strength of mothers provide solid anchor during many tumults of life.

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            1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
              Jan 8, 2019 at 19:21

              🙂

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    2. Jeanine and Sal Falco says:
      Jan 9, 2019 at 19:34

      Powerful words to live by! : )

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      1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
        Jan 9, 2019 at 20:27

        Thanks a lot dear..Means world to me

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  7. copypowerblog says:
    Dec 27, 2018 at 23:01

    The real power of a man is in the size of smile of the woman standing next to him. A true man of substance and poise. K.

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Dec 27, 2018 at 23:02

      Nice words..Thanks K

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  8. Kerubin says:
    Dec 27, 2018 at 13:29

    Lovely

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Dec 27, 2018 at 14:16

      Thanks a lot.

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  9. diaryofnisha9 says:
    Dec 27, 2018 at 04:03

    What beautiful woman and a great simple way of describing her beauty

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Dec 27, 2018 at 07:08

      Thanks a lot Nisha!!

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  10. Darshan Kanade says:
    Dec 21, 2018 at 19:00

    Loved this… and the painting is amazing too…

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Dec 21, 2018 at 20:34

      Painting is by my friend and words are mine.. Thanks

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  11. Rekha Sahay says:
    Dec 21, 2018 at 14:25

    Reblogged this on The REKHA SAHAY Corner!.

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Dec 21, 2018 at 14:26

      Thanks a lot Rekha..It means a lot!

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      1. Rekha Sahay says:
        Dec 21, 2018 at 14:28

        In friendship- no thanks no…..

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        1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
          Dec 21, 2018 at 14:29

          Hehe!! Noted So you are from which city?

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          1. Rekha Sahay says:
            Dec 21, 2018 at 14:30

            I live in Pune, I am from patna /Ranchi

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            1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
              Dec 21, 2018 at 14:31

              Ok…me too Pune

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              1. Rekha Sahay says:
                Dec 21, 2018 at 14:42

                Really? Nice to know.

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                1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
                  Dec 21, 2018 at 14:42

                  Yes! from 5 years.

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                  1. Rekha Sahay says:
                    Dec 21, 2018 at 19:32

                    Are you working here. Today I visited shanivaar baada .

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  12. ritwika16 says:
    Dec 19, 2018 at 19:45

    Nice lines!

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Dec 19, 2018 at 19:49

      Thanks Ritwika.

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  13. rue202 says:
    Dec 19, 2018 at 15:32

    Great poem! Nicely written and I like the descriptions.

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Dec 19, 2018 at 15:34

      Thanks!! Nice to connect.

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  14. The Wizard says:
    Dec 18, 2018 at 20:18

    Love

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Dec 18, 2018 at 20:19

      Thanks Wizard!

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  15. Ananya says:
    Dec 18, 2018 at 12:13

    Wow!! Nice poems and write ups..well I too write poems, some are in my blog..do check out if u get a chance..nice work👍👌

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Dec 18, 2018 at 12:16

      Sure…Checking it right now.! Thanks for following and appreciating!

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      1. Ananya says:
        Dec 18, 2018 at 12:20

        My pleasure

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        1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
          Dec 18, 2018 at 12:22

          ❤

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  16. swathi says:
    Dec 13, 2018 at 22:14

    Such a beautiful lines…Well expressed…yeah!! Women – A Vibrant soul with full of positivity…..

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Dec 13, 2018 at 22:16

      Very true!

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  17. cj544101 says:
    Dec 13, 2018 at 20:25

    Beautiful ❤️

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Dec 13, 2018 at 20:25

      Thanks a Lot CJ!!! ❤

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  18. Irene Starr says:
    Dec 12, 2018 at 19:27

    Wonderful!
    Two great forms of art, poetry and painting, combined, looks and sounds great!

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Dec 12, 2018 at 19:41

      Those are lovely words!! Thanks for the lovely feedback

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      1. Irene Starr says:
        Dec 12, 2018 at 19:42

        It’s my pleasure!

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        1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
          Dec 12, 2018 at 20:37

          ❤

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  19. Irene Starr says:
    Dec 12, 2018 at 19:21

    Wonderful!
    Two great forms of art, poetry and painting, combined in the post, looks perfect 👌

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  20. s l says:
    Dec 12, 2018 at 09:14

    Very nice …both poem and painting.

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Dec 12, 2018 at 09:45

      Thanks a lot dear..Very well painted by my friends!! The words automatically came out after seeing the painting

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      1. s l says:
        Dec 12, 2018 at 09:51

        Nice

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        1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
          Dec 12, 2018 at 10:05

          Thanks again!

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  21. Graci says:
    Dec 12, 2018 at 03:47

    Lovely. The blending of the colors you’ve chosen is rich and deep.

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Dec 19, 2018 at 15:31

      Thanks Graci!

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      1. Graci says:
        Dec 19, 2018 at 18:25

        You are welcome.

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  22. Himani Gupta says:
    Dec 11, 2018 at 23:06

    Beautiful

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Dec 11, 2018 at 23:08

      Thanks a lot!!!

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  23. Jayshree Solanki says:
    Dec 11, 2018 at 22:28

    💐🙏

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Dec 11, 2018 at 22:29

      Thanks a lot!!

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  24. rita saxena says:
    Dec 11, 2018 at 18:17

    And you said it all 👍

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Dec 11, 2018 at 18:28

      Just a few thoughts I think 🙂

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  25. rita saxena says:
    Dec 11, 2018 at 18:16

    And you said it all

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Dec 11, 2018 at 18:27

      Thanks..Just mentioned a few lines on being a woman!

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  26. Thought for Change says:
    Dec 11, 2018 at 18:00

    Lovely

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Dec 11, 2018 at 18:01

      Thanks!

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