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Your Shadow!

Posted by scorpio1987Sazz on

Rough Translation in English to my poem Teri Parchhaii

I am smitten by this pretty evening’s moonlight..

The aroma of the air has made me mesmerized..

What and why I am pursuing in this twilight? 

When in every corner I see only your shadow..

© Sajal Gupta – 04.01.2019

For Hindi Version Check this link – Teri Parchhaii!

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A well traveled, nature loving and an aspiring writer. Have started newly and wish to collaborate with like minded people into the world of literary.

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  1. Through my eyes😊 says:
    Apr 15, 2019 at 23:24

    Beautifully👌❤

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    1. scorpio1987Sazz says:
      Apr 18, 2019 at 07:07

      Thanks a lot dear!

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  2. BreakingBone says:
    Jan 20, 2019 at 13:56

    Thanks for the follow

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Jan 20, 2019 at 13:57

      Thanks.. Do check my blogs on https://mesmotsbysazz.com

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Jan 8, 2019 at 18:09

      Excellent

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  4. ForgivingConnects says:
    Jan 8, 2019 at 07:23

    Lovely to meet you. Thank you for following my blog! Many blessings. ~Debbie

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Jan 8, 2019 at 07:30

      Thanks a lot..Do check my blogs dear too on https://mesmotsbysazz.com and share your views

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  5. rajanisingh885721172 says:
    Jan 7, 2019 at 14:01

    Fabulous post

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Jan 7, 2019 at 14:01

      Thanks a lot Rajani

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  6. diaryofnisha9 says:
    Jan 6, 2019 at 23:56

    Love and love

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Jan 7, 2019 at 00:03

      Of?

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      1. diaryofnisha9 says:
        Jan 7, 2019 at 00:05

        The beloved

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  7. diaryofnisha9 says:
    Jan 6, 2019 at 04:56

    Lovers follow their love they feel it short and true

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Jan 6, 2019 at 07:27

      Dan true

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  8. da-AL says:
    Jan 5, 2019 at 12:35

    you’ve captured the mood 🙂

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Jan 5, 2019 at 15:34

      Thanks lot dear..Can I ask you to share this with your friends?

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  9. Ramyani Bhattacharya says:
    Jan 4, 2019 at 20:15

    I am actually mesmerised by these lines.😃

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Jan 4, 2019 at 20:16

      Thanks a lot!!

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    2. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Jan 4, 2019 at 20:17

      You must read Hindi version too..

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  10. Neha Kulkarni says:
    Jan 4, 2019 at 18:37

    Actually.. The lines echo in our minds when read in both Hindi and English

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Jan 4, 2019 at 19:19

      Really? I just roughly translated it..It feels proud that it makes such effect!

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  11. deyspublishing says:
    Jan 4, 2019 at 17:48

    Beautifully written.

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Jan 4, 2019 at 18:05

      Thanks.. Actually this is just a translated version of my original poem..Real essence was in Hindi 🙂

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      1. Shivani. says:
        Jan 4, 2019 at 19:31

        Absolutely true,the real feelings are portrayed deeply in the Hindi one.
        But this one’s beautiful as well!
        Nice work Sajal!😇💓

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        1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
          Jan 4, 2019 at 19:36

          Thanks a lot Yaar

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          1. deyspublishing says:
            Jan 4, 2019 at 20:19

            No prob

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            1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
              Jan 4, 2019 at 20:20

              🙂 Appreciate your feedback

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              1. deyspublishing says:
                Jan 4, 2019 at 20:25

                You’re welcome 👍

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                1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
                  Jan 4, 2019 at 20:39

                  🙂

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    2. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Jan 4, 2019 at 19:39

      Thanks a lot

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  12. Poems of Mariana says:
    Jan 4, 2019 at 17:43

    Love is beautiful especially when it’s sincere

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Jan 4, 2019 at 18:06

      Absolutely true.. Innocence is the essence

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