love, Short Poem

I promised that way!

Posted by scorpio1987Sazz on

I had promised with myself that I will not fall again for you.
But your mesmerising eyes couldn’t let me do.
Now I have learnt to fall in much deeper for you.
©Sajal Gupta – 08.02.2019

My Original Poem in Hindi – Soch lia tha! I promised that way

man in black long sleeved shirt and woman in black dress

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Published by scorpio1987Sazz

A well traveled, nature loving and an aspiring writer. Have started newly and wish to collaborate with like minded people into the world of literary.

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  1. huguetta says:
    Apr 5, 2019 at 01:27

    I have nominated you for the Mystery Blogger Award
    Good luck! 🙂
    https://huguetta.wordpress.com/2019/04/04/mystery-blogger-award-third-nomination/

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    1. scorpio1987Sazz says:
      Apr 5, 2019 at 09:53

      Thanks a lot dear!!!

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      1. huguetta says:
        Apr 5, 2019 at 12:57

        My pleasure 😊 Have a great day!

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        1. scorpio1987Sazz says:
          Apr 5, 2019 at 12:59

          🙂

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  2. godtisx says:
    Feb 13, 2019 at 10:10

    Love is like this.

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Feb 13, 2019 at 10:30

      Yeah!!

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  3. richa pandey says:
    Feb 9, 2019 at 19:26

    Well penned

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Feb 11, 2019 at 09:19

      Thanks a lot Richa!!

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  4. Thought for Change says:
    Feb 8, 2019 at 19:01

    Beautiful

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Feb 9, 2019 at 07:37

      Thanks 🙂

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  5. Garfield Hug says:
    Feb 8, 2019 at 18:33

    Glad you found love as it is not easy❤🌷

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Feb 8, 2019 at 18:55

      🙂

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  6. Brenda Davis Harsham says:
    Feb 8, 2019 at 16:52

    Lovely wistful quality.

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Feb 8, 2019 at 17:13

      Thanks Brenda 🙂

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  7. Baffledmum says:
    Feb 8, 2019 at 13:29

    Sometimes you can’t help falling…. ❤

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Feb 8, 2019 at 14:10

      true!!

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  8. zeesviews says:
    Feb 8, 2019 at 12:21

    This promise was made to be broken😜
    Beautiful write up☺️🤗

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Feb 8, 2019 at 12:32

      Thanks a lot dear!!! Do check the Hindi version too 🙂

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      1. zeesviews says:
        Feb 8, 2019 at 12:34

        Yeah sure..I’ll☺️

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        1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
          Feb 8, 2019 at 12:36

          ❤ https://mesmotsbysazz.com/2018/11/19/soch-lia-tha/ here is the link

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          1. zeesviews says:
            Feb 8, 2019 at 12:39

            Its even more beautiful☺️🤗

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            1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
              Feb 8, 2019 at 12:53

              thanks a lot dear ❤ do read my poems and let know your views on it.

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              1. zeesviews says:
                Feb 8, 2019 at 14:38

                Definitely😇

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                1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
                  Feb 8, 2019 at 14:38

                  🙂 ❤

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  9. Trupti says:
    Feb 8, 2019 at 11:38

    Yeah, it came on perfect time …
    Keep it up😁

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Feb 8, 2019 at 11:38

      thanks a lot Trupti!

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  10. Trupti says:
    Feb 8, 2019 at 11:35

    Nicely written !!
    Is it a Valentine edition ??😉

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Feb 8, 2019 at 11:36

      haha..wasn’t supposed to be that way..But I guess timing is perfect 🙂

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  11. postcardfromlifelately says:
    Feb 8, 2019 at 11:23

    👌💞

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Feb 8, 2019 at 11:34

      🙂

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  12. inhiscare753 says:
    Feb 8, 2019 at 11:21

    Beautiful

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Feb 8, 2019 at 11:21

      thanks a lot dear 🙂

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      1. inhiscare753 says:
        Feb 8, 2019 at 11:36

        🤗🙏💜

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        1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
          Feb 8, 2019 at 11:36

          🙂 ❤

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  13. Sakshi says:
    Feb 8, 2019 at 10:31

    Such is love

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    1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
      Feb 8, 2019 at 10:33

      True, its season of Love ❤

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      1. Sakshi says:
        Feb 8, 2019 at 14:02

        😀🌼

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        1. scorpio1987Sajal says:
          Feb 8, 2019 at 14:10

          🙂

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