love, Short Poem

You and I = Inseparable.

Posted by scorpio1987Sazz on

You and I, are the inseparable soul..

No matter how far we live, our life has only one goal..

Your smile, pacifies my heart..

Seeing you cry I get torn apart..

I promise to live as one, even a moment without you has no fun.. 

©Sajal Gupta – 27.02.2019

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PS : The black and white sketch in the picture is a courtesy to an immensely talented artist and my dear friend Akankshita Arya

 

 

 

Published by scorpio1987Sazz

A well traveled, nature loving and an aspiring writer. Have started newly and wish to collaborate with like minded people into the world of literary.

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  1. nidhijoshi says:
    Mar 29, 2019 at 15:42

    This is amazing! I love love. beautifully written

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    1. scorpio1987Sazz says:
      Mar 29, 2019 at 15:47

      Thanks a tonne dear

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  2. Akanshita Arya says:
    Mar 1, 2019 at 22:04

    Very well written sazzy…
    The theme of sketch was “we are not far apart” and u absolutely nailed it with such a heart touching and soulful poem …only a loving and kind heart can understand the emotions behind this sketch….#loveandgratitude 🙏♥️

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    1. scorpio1987Sazz says:
      Mar 2, 2019 at 08:08

      Thanks a Lot Akkki, your Sketches are becoming my inspiration..I have just given words to it…But real soul lies in your art!!!

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  3. Apeksha Rai says:
    Mar 1, 2019 at 20:41

    This is beautiful!

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    1. scorpio1987Sazz says:
      Mar 1, 2019 at 20:48

      So much thanks to you Apeksha

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  4. inhiscare753 says:
    Mar 1, 2019 at 06:55

    Beautifully written!

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    1. scorpio1987Sazz says:
      Mar 1, 2019 at 07:29

      Thanks a lot dear

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      1. inhiscare753 says:
        Mar 1, 2019 at 07:46

        You are very welcome! 😊💜

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        1. scorpio1987Sazz says:
          Mar 1, 2019 at 11:33

          Pleasure is mine Yonnie!

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          1. inhiscare753 says:
            Mar 1, 2019 at 16:46

            💜🤗🌸

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            1. scorpio1987Sazz says:
              Mar 1, 2019 at 17:29

              🙂 ❤

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  5. macalder02 says:
    Feb 28, 2019 at 21:07

    Your verses convey the deepest feelings of love. A good poem

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    1. scorpio1987Sazz says:
      Feb 28, 2019 at 21:11

      Thanks for such lovely appreciations

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  6. Nirant Gurav says:
    Feb 28, 2019 at 20:12

    Beautifully penned 👏 💯 mate

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    1. scorpio1987Sazz says:
      Feb 28, 2019 at 20:16

      Thanks a lot Dude..

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      1. Nirant Gurav says:
        Feb 28, 2019 at 20:17

        Pleasure always for ur stuff dawg 🤜🤛

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        1. scorpio1987Sazz says:
          Feb 28, 2019 at 20:19

          Dawg?

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          1. Nirant Gurav says:
            Feb 28, 2019 at 20:20

            Dawg = Dude 😉

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            1. scorpio1987Sazz says:
              Feb 28, 2019 at 20:20

              Lol..this new generation

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              1. Nirant Gurav says:
                Feb 28, 2019 at 20:25

                😁😁
                Have a good day mate !!

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                1. scorpio1987Sazz says:
                  Feb 28, 2019 at 20:35

                  Cheers!!

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  7. Ananya says:
    Feb 28, 2019 at 19:31

    Well done*
    Matching*

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    1. scorpio1987Sazz says:
      Feb 28, 2019 at 20:16

      Thanks Ananya!!

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      1. Ananya says:
        Feb 28, 2019 at 21:54

        Pleasure! ☺

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        1. scorpio1987Sazz says:
          Mar 1, 2019 at 00:20

          🙂

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  8. Ananya says:
    Feb 28, 2019 at 19:31

    Beautifully written..And Amazing sketch!!! Well, done both of you. Words depict true emotions and same with the sketch. It so much matched with the feelings expressed through the poetry..great job👍👍

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    1. scorpio1987Sazz says:
      Feb 28, 2019 at 20:18

      Thanks a lot dear..And I was not even aware about the theme and saw the sketch and wrote in like 2 minutes

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      1. Ananya says:
        Feb 28, 2019 at 21:54

        Oh wow.. That’s what we call talent..👍👍

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        1. scorpio1987Sazz says:
          Feb 28, 2019 at 22:05

          Thanks!!

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